Thursday, August 20, 2009

Composition Studies

Girls too big, girl in front not included.

1 comment:

JohnK said...

Keep going Jojo

I see much improvement

work on being less messy

the trees are great

don't fill in negative spaces

use guides to make your compositions work - like the girls running towards Spooky. I put a guide around them to show they all fit into that simple bullet shaped space. You drew them one at a time instead and hoped they would add up.

your feeling is getting much better and the characters are looking cuter

don't forget space on the head behind the faces- don't fill up a whole head with a face

your best friend John