Even More Composition Study

The negative space does help a lot.

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Sorry if anyone finds the different colored pieces weird. I'm using animation paper, so I have to scan different pieces of the paper and then piece them back together in photoshop since my scanner is small.

More Post Composition

Used the bullet, payed more attention to the trees and space in the faces:

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Post Trees Study and Process

Wanted to get more flow into this.

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I already notice that I made the tuft on the second girl too big, which breaks the silhouette.

Hey John I just got your notes. I'll keep working on the things I need to fix.

Composition Studies

Girls too big, girl in front not included.

Sherbert

George and Jimmy (Uploading More)

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Need to add George.

Need to add George.

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George Liquor Storyboard to Layout Attempts